FLASH FICTION FOR THE PURPOSEFUL PRACTITIONER- 2017
WEEK #34
ANNIE’S HOUSE
Annie had lived in the house since she was a small child. Having to sell it was difficult. There were so many memories made there.
She invested a lot of money to update the house and she wanted to live in it forever, but could not afford the house payments any longer.
The day after the sale of the house, she was walking across the road and hit by a car. She died immediately.
Over the years, many families lived in the house, but none stayed very long.
Annie became very excited the day the city posted a do not trespass sign in the yard.
She could finally relax and enjoy her house by herself!
Copyright © 2017 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved
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Tricky ending. Nice story; I enjoyed it.
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Thank you! 😊
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Now Annie is at peace. enjoyed reading it even though it is sad.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Nice ending. Nice story!
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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That’s the way to keep your house to yourself! Well done.
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It sure is! Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
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Such devotion to a house … wow! Very nice ending.
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