Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers

Week of 11-15 through 11-21-2016

This week’s photo prompt is provided by Barb CT of the blog, Gallimaufry. Thank you Barb!

Necessary Changes

I really miss coming here. We use to have so much fun swimming, eating and dancing,” Brianna said sadly.

“Yes, and now it looks bad and is not used the way it could be,” Gavin remarked.

“Why doesn’t the owner fix it up?” Brianna questioned.  “It has so much potential.”

“Oh! The owner is going to make the necessary changes and it will become popular once again,” Gavin informed her.

“How do you know that?”

“Because it is sold and the new owner will make it a place where our community can enjoy the lake and facilities once again, but this time it will be an even better place to come have fun.”

“Who is it?”   Brianna asked with a puzzled look.

“You, my dear, are looking at him!”

Brianna jumped up and down with excitement, grabbed him, and gave him a kiss he would never forget!

Words (152)

Copyright © 2016 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved


20 thoughts on “NECESSARY CHANGES

  1. Aww, so beautiful write up, ended with a lovely way. Though it is sad to have the places but lack in maintenance but for everything there is absolutely something that happens with its time.


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