Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
Week of 09-13 through 09-19-2016
his week’s photo prompt is provided by Jade M. Wong. Thank you Jade for our photo prompt!
SECRET
“Patrick, what is that?” Jeffery asked.
“It’s a magic pink diamond.”
“I can see that it’s pink and diamond shape, but where did you get it?”
“It was on the floor of the space museum.”
“You stole it!”
“No, not exactly, it was sitting by a trash can.”
“Hey! Maybe it is the object the scientist are looking for.”
“What object?” Patrick questioned.
“I don’t know, they won’t say anything about it.”
“What is the diamond for, Patrick?”
“It’s amazing! I left it in my bedroom when I went to school and when I came home my whole room was neat and clean! I love it!”
“Maybe your mom cleaned your room.”
“No, she told me if I did not clean it every day she would throw my things in a huge pile on the back porch and I could sort things out there.”
“Wow! I want one of those.”
“Well, let’s keep it a secret and I will share it with you.”
“Deal!”
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Copyright © 2016 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved
Reflections Of Life's Journey 
Oh my! I want that magic Pink Diamond! I would love to wake up to a clean house and all the chores done every morning! Great story, Jessie!
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Thank you! If I could mass produce them, I could make a fortune! Ha! Ha! My granddaugher would be standing in front of me with her hand held out! 🙂
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My house could do with one of them! Nice story.
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Ha! Ha! Mine too. Thank you.
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Just think, if those things were mass produced, housework could become obsolete – worldwide! Great dialogue between the two lads, Jessie. 🙂
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Thank you! It was fun to write. I would love to have one of those kind of diamonds as well. 😊
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😀 😀
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A magic diamond that cleans things for me? I’m sold! Where do I get one?? Lol
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I’ve done enough cleaning and organizing in my life that I would gladly give people one these pink diamonds if I had millions of them I could give out! 😄
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Can I have one please?
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Absolutely! 🙂
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I’d love to have one of these as well.
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As soon as I figure out how to get one and mass produce it, I will be giving them out like hotcakes!! 😁. p.s. I now have your name on the list.
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Sounds like an interesting beginning of a Disney Sci-Fi movie. Maybe this diamond is good but bad guys scientists or something could do real damage with it? At least maybe they’ll share. But that might be a difficult item to give up.
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If it is used for the good….that would be wonderful, but if used for destruction, it needs to be destroyed unless it is for needed protection. Hopefully, only good things come from the use of it.:) Thank you for commenting. It would make an interesting Disney Sci-Fi movie! 🙂
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Ellespeth holds out her hand for this diamond. I just want to borrow it for a few days 😛
Wonderful story of magical housekeeping hopes.
Ellespeth
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Thank you! 🙂 I agree…a few days would be great…I’d even settle for a few hours!
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May I borrow it please. I will definitely appreciate the loan.
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Yes indeed! Everyone would benefit from one of these! 😊
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