SIX SENTENCE STORIES Cue…Market
Tattoo Man
Austin and Landon were in Elmer’s Market when a tall man with tattoos all over his arms walked in, said something to the cashier and took a bag from her while Landon stood staring at him.
An alarm went off and the man showed a gun while telling everyone to back away from the door.
Everyone did as told, but Landon continued to stand there and stare at the man when sirens could be heard from a distance and the man grabbed Landon, took him outside, shoved him in a car and drove off with him.
Austin was in a panic for fear of Landon’s life and knew Landon would be traumatized especially since he was only five years old.
The police officers were in pursuit of the vehicle when it ran off the road and smashed into a large section of shrubbery in someone’s yard.
The vehicle stopped , the police officers ran to it and found the driver unconscious and Landon curled up on the floor of the back seat, unharmed.
Copyright © 2016 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved
damn!*
*compliment, as in, ‘an awful engaging and action packed story to create in the space of six sentences!’
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Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it.
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That was tense! Glad Landon was found safe…
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Thank you! 🙂
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Poor Landon. Although, he seemed to be okay with everything. Probably not really aware of how much danger he was in. Great storybJessie..
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Thank you! He will probably have a few nightmares about it. That kind of drama can really have consequences for a little kid.
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What was so great about this story was that the reader has no idea where it is heading for. Excellent!
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Thanks so much for the compliment! 🙂
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No matter how the tension builds, I always like a happy ending.
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😊 So do I! Thank you.
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Tense!! I like it.
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Thank you! 😊
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Whew! Awesome! I also just love tje name Landon!
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Thank you! I like the name because it is so different and you rarely hear it.
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