We are given our photo prompt by our wonderful Friday Fictioneer leader, Rochelle . The rules are to write a story in 100 words, using the photo prompt as inspiration.

copyright-Rich Voza

copyright-Rich Voza


The beautiful view from the plane nearly took my breath away.

Everyone wore a special headset and we arrived at our destination very quickly.

The place was amazing!  I felt relaxed and was given my own special tour.

My whole life passed in front of me.  It was fascinating! There were many things I wanted to change.

Everyone learned from their mistakes in life and how to prevent from making them in the future.

We returned home and began living our life with a better understanding of how to make better choices and how to treat one another.

Words (98)

Copyright © 2016 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved

6 thoughts on “UNDERSTANDING

  1. Absolutely! Imagine the mistakes you could avoid going forward! I guess mistakes or bad choices are a part of the learning process even though it is often unpleasant. They seem to stick in your mind.


  2. Dear Jessie,

    I get the feeling this was a virtual flight. It would be nice if one could go back and make different choices. On the other hand how would those effect the present? Imaginative story.




  3. Thank you. 😊 Choices made in the past can not be altered. Only choices made going forward into the future can be made with the tool of information that they received on their tour , thus preventing future choices from being made unwisely.


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