Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
Week of 05-24 through 05-30-2016
his week’s photo prompt is provided by TJ Paris. Thank you TJ for our photo prompt!
Dome School
“Astair, where do you go to school?” Bobby asked.
“I go to the Dome school.”
“Dumb school! Where is it?”
“Not dumb school, Dome school.”
“Oh! I’m glad to hear that! But, where is it?”
“I’ll take you to it and show you how different it is from your school.”
“You’re right, Astair, I’ve never seen a school like this before. “
“Bobby stand beside me in the middle of the building, ” Astair instructed.
As they stood there the dome shape came downward toward them.
After landing on the ground, Astair and Bobby were surrounded by colorful doors.
Astair told Bobby they could enter the doors and each one had a different class room behind them.
“Astair, how does a full size classroom fit behind each of these doors?” Bobby questioned.
“It’s a Dome thing.”
“Why do you think it’s dumb.”
“No, I said Dome, not dumb!”
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Copyright © 2016 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved
Hahaha! Bobby seems to be having problems differntiating between dome and dumb. Cute story, Jessie! I like your creative imagination about Dome school.
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Thank you, Joy! I had to get creative on this one. 🙂
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You did good!
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It’s going to be a long afternoon for the both of them.
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cute story.
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Thank you! 🙂 Yes, I believe it will!
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It’s a Dome story right? Not a Dumb one?
DJ
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You got it! 🙂
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Cute. Sounds like a bit of a magical school. Nice play in dome and dumb 🙂
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Thank you! Yes, it is very magical. 🙂
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LOL! Bobby needs choose a door and take a dome trip! Great story…
Ellespeth
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Yes, he may find it very educational! 😄
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Bobby probably has some ear wax. Fun take 🙂
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Thank you! 😊 I am concerned about all the other words he may hearing wrong! 😱
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