Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
Week of 04-12 through 04-18-2016
This week’s photo prompt is provided by BarbCT/Knotholes and Textures. Thank you Barb!
Remarkable Experience
“Sadie, what was one of your most remarkable experiences?” Shelby asked.
“Oh! Without a doubt, it was my first date with Monroe!”
“Tell me about it.”
“I wanted everything perfect that night and when my shoe strap came loose, he was right there to fix it and he handled my awkward situation perfectly.”
“He was gentle in adjusting the strap, and seemed quite concerned that I may have fallen and injured myself.”
“I was thinking the evening started off badly, but he proved me wrong.”
“The entire night was unbelievable! We talked and laughed, danced, ate a very delicious meal and he was a complete gentleman the entire evening.”
“When he took me home, he walked me to my front door, gave me a gentle kiss and handed me a red rose. He told me he wished all his dates could be as wonderful as the one we had.”
“We got married four months later and have been very happy for thirty years now.”
Words ( 158)
Copyright © 2016 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved
Reflections Of Life's Journey 
What a wonderful first date that ended up in a long happy marriage! Love it! This is a marvelous story, Jessie!
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Thank you, Joy. I’m glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
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Sounds like a happy love story. And Monroe played his cards right, not to mention he seemed genuinely nice. Great write Jessie.
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Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Happily ever after! Sweet story!☺
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Thank you! 🙂
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Loved the description of the first date. So starry and romantic. Lovely thing you did with the prompt. Kudos!
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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Lovely romance!!
@Samantha/samratkel from
Shadow Realities
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Thank you! 🙂
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sometimes it pays off to follow our heart…
this piece is so well written and hopeful.
ellespeth
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Thank you for such a nice compliment. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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aww so romantic 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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Beautiful piece 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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Lovely story!
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Thank you!
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