MONDAY FINISH THE STORY…….October 19, 2015
CABINS
Not knowing what to expect, he made his way into the dark of the forest.
“Robert, what are you doing out here?” Haley asked.
“Just checking things out. There are too many trees over there and it would be dark unless we cut down a lot of them. I can visualize the cabins right along this area though.”
“Please don’t get your hopes up because the bank may not approve the loan.”
“They have to! The children need a place to come in the summer and this place is perfect.”
“I know, and the orphanage is really counting on it.”
The next day they received notification that the loan was not approved.
While attending a meeting with the orphanage officials, Mr. Barton, the CEO read a letter from an anonymous donor.
“Please accept my donation for the entire cost of the orphanage cabins , swimming pool and sports equipment.”
The letter signed: Fellow orphan bringing light, peace and joy.
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Each week, Mondays Finish the Story challenges our minds by providing with a picture along with the first sentence for us to finish the flash fiction with 100 -150 words based on the picture above.
Copyright © 2015 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved
What a heart-warming story. I like happily-ever-afters. 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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I love that last line about an orphan helping orphans. The kids would be overjoyed.
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Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it .
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Very uplifting!
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Thank you! 😃
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I wish this actually happens.
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I know, it would be awesome! 🙂
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JC – this is a delightful story! I truly enjoyed it! Thank you for participating in the Mondays Finish the Story challenge. I appreciate your contribution. Be well… ^..^
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Thank you so much! I enjoy the challenge. 🙂
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So glad they got hold of the money. Thanks to the anonymous donor. Happy endings are much better than the sad ones. Well written 😀
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Thanks so much. 🙂
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