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AND THE CUE IS …..PERFECT
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AN UNUSUAL PERFECT DAY
Jordan had a perfect day until she entered the parking garage and saw that the left front tire on her car was flat.
Her time of tribulation was just beginning when she looked in the trunk to see if the spare tire was good and she noticed the silhouette of someone in the shadows of her car.
She was about to make a hasty return to the parking garage elevator when a man grabbed her arm, told her to stop, and then said he noticed the flat tire and would help her with it.
He said his name was Brandon as he pulled out the spare tire, car jack, tire iron and began to change the tire.
Jordan was thinking that maybe her day would continue being perfect now that the tire would be replaced and especially by such a nice looking hunk of a man.
As soon as the tire was replaced, Brandon tried to force Jordan in the trunk, but she grabbed the tire iron, slammed it against his head just at the perfect angle causing him to drop to the pavement unconscious.
Copyright © 2015 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved
I was anxious through this whole thing…. Im so glad she was victorious!!! As it should be!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Wow, what was a suspenseful six sentence story! I was gripped up till the end and I am glad to see she defeated him.
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I had a feeling it was going to turn sinister…I maybe watching a few too many Law and Order re-runs. Well done. Glad she found the perfect angle!
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lol… nice double twist on the ending. (much better that good triumph)
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🙂 Thank you!
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I was quite suspicious of Brandon because he grabbed her arm. So many ups and downs in this story.
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Yes, he was pretty smooth about it and managed to get her to co-operate, for a while at least. Thank you for reading and commenting. 🙂
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Perfect piece of writing in six sentences. Whole story complete! I think I must also try this!
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Thank you! Yes, try it, it’s fun coming up with a story in Six sentences. It’s great practice in writing short stories.
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Good on you Jordan, teach him a lesson he won’t forget any time soon!
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True. Thanks for reading and commenting.😃
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