Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
Week of 07-22 thru 07-28-2015
This week’s photo prompt is provided by TJ Paris. Thank you TJ!
After The Storm
After the severe storm had passed over the island everyone was greatly surprised when they viewed the damage it had done.
There was debris in every direction and the main building was partly caved in.
They were trying to account for everyone and discovered Allison was missing. They immediately began to go through the rubble pulling pieces to one side in hope of finding her.
There were no sounds coming from all the piles of wood and concrete. After several hours of searching they discovered Allison’s dog, Jackson, pinned under a large piece of wood.
They freed Jackson and continued to search for Allison. Moments later they saw Jackson pacing over an area of rubble and ran over to him.
They pulled away some rubble and could see Allison at the bottom of it.
Thanks to Jackson, 
they had reached Allison in time to save her life.
Words (147)
Copyright © 2015 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved
Sad story but at least it had two happy endings! Thank you so much for being a loyal contributor to FFfAW Jessie! I appreciate you! And I always look forward to reading your stories!
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Thank you. And that you so much for the sweet compliment…I enjoy participating and am grateful for you hosting the challenges. I look forward to them.😊
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I’m glad to hear that Jessie. Thank you!
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A dog to the rescue.. Good story of love
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Thanks so much!
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A story that could have had such a sad ending if not for the ever faithful Jackson. He undoubtedly saved Allison’s life after that violent storm. Well told, Jessie.
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Thank you, I appreciate your comment.
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I liked the happy ending. What would we do without our furry friends?
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Thank you! Yes, they do add a great deal of quality to our life. 🐕🐈🐎 😊
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Is that a photograph of your dog, Jessie? So cute! Timely story…right in the middle of hurricane season and also all the strange storms we’ve been having here in California this month.
Ellespeth
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No, he is my granddog…all 7 pounds of him. He is one of the most lovable dogs I have ever known. Thank you for your nice comment. 😊
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I love happy endings, and yours is excellent.
Jackson is one fantastic and loyal dog.
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Thank you! Thank goodness for a dog’s great sense of smell.
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Good ending,Jessie.
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Thank you! 😊
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And Jackson saves the day!!! Great story and ending 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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great ending to what could have otherwise been a tragedy.. lovely story Jessie 🙂
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Thank you so much.😃
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Great Flash Fiction. One has to choose their works carefully.
Thank you for your kind words.
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Thank God for happy endings!
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Amen!
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