Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
Week of 07-15 thru 07-21-2015
This week’s photo prompt is provided by Sonya O. Thank you Sonya!
BEAUTIFUL SWAN
“Quit moping around. You and I can go to see the ice sculptures. You will see Drake later,” said Carmela’s mother.
They were admiring the beautiful ice sculptures and Carmela said, “look at that swan over there. It’s absolutely beautiful!”
Carmela and her mother walked over to it and Carmela screamed out, “I can’t believe it mom! Look what it says in front of the swan.”
The heart-shaped sign had the words, Carmela, I am so in love with you. Will you marry me?
Drake stepped up behind Carmela, turned her around to face him, and said, “please say yes! You, Carmela, are my beautiful swan.” She showed him her most adorable smile and said, “yes, I will marry you!”
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Copyright © 2015 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved
How romantic and sweet! Now she is glad she went to see the ice sculptures! Love it!
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Thank you! I’m pleased that you like it. 🙂
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Love the romance!
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Very romantic! A beautiful way to propose
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Thank you!
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Aww, what a romantic proposal!
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Thank you for reading and commenting. 🙂
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Awww! Romantic and at Christmas too.
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Yes, a very Merry Christmas! Thank you for commenting.
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Beautiful Jesse ~ I love your setting for a proposal ~ This scene could easily follow my response ~ 🙂
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Thank you. I love to hear about different ways that people propose.
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What a lovely, romantic proposal. I think Carmela can look forward to roses and violins – and lots of chocolates from now on. Beautiful story, Jessie. 🙂
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Thank you. Yes, it certainly sounds like things are off to a good start!
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A beautiful proposal. 🙂 It’s a good job she went to see the ice sculptures without him or she might have missed it entirely!
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That would be terrible! Thanks to her mother, she was guided in the right direction. Thank you for your nice comment.
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Awww what a sweet proposal.
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Thank you! 😃
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