This is in response to a weekly challenge hosted by Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The goal is to write a story between 100-150 (give or take 25 words) based on the provided photo.
This is a continued mini-series.
Chapters 1 through 13 on:
Permalink: https://luckyjc007.com/2015/05/26/mini-series/
Investigation
Garnet and Marla had arrived the next day.
Damon and Garnet had an emotional visit with their parents. Their father was out of the coma and was gradually recovering.
Their mother sensed the strong emotional connection between Damon and DeeGee. During their conversation Damon and Garnet received a call from the police.
The investigation of DeeGee’s disappearance had turned intense. There was a serial killer in the area. Three women with hair color blond, brunette, and black had been found with newspaper stuffed down their throat and a piece placed across their body. Each victim was found at a different hotel.
The service supervisor of the hotel DeeGee was staying at had not been questioned. She had gone to her parent’s ranch to help them with their horses for a few days. She was returning to work within a few hours.
DeeGee was trapped in a tiny apartment. She spent her time reading a book she found in the room, praying diligently, and banging on the iron door with a pot in hopes that someone would hear her.
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Copyright © 2015 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved
Oh No, I do hope and pray that someone hears and answers Deegee’s call for help. This is getting more and more unexpected 😀
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Yes, there is a lot involved here. Thank you for commenting.
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Nice story Jessie. The poor things keep getting themselves into pickles. Hopefully they will all wrap it up with a happy ending. 🙂
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Thank you. Yes, just when you think things are going well, something happens to stir things up for you!
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I hope someone gets to Deegee in time!
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Me too! 😱 Thank you! 😉
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Jessie, I just wanted to give you a head’s up. On the challenge post for next week I will be asking everyone who is writing serial stories to wrap them up by the end of the month.
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O.K. , no problem, I was about done with it anyway.
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very intriguing Jessie – and an unexpected turn of events!
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Thank you!
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Oh dear – things are not looking good for DeeGee. I hope they find her soon!
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Yes, things are coming together real soon. Thank you .
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This is quite the adventure/mystery tale. I love the small apartment, then the iron door.
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Thank you, I’m glad you find it interesting. 😃
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