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Friday Fictioneers:
“Strip Tease”
Molly pulled out her photo album and found the old silo picture.
She told her friend it was destroyed in a hurricane with wind velocity of over one hundred miles an hour. There were rain drops larger than ping-pong balls and the clouds were black as coal.
The silo swayed with the wind like it was performing a strip tease dance. Pieces of the silo kept flying off until there was just a bare frame left.
It was a fantastic sight!
Copyright © 2015 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved
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That does sound like it would be very cool to watch – from a safe distance of course!
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Yes, distance from it would make it more enjoyable to watch. Thanks for commenting.
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A strip-teasing silo – definitely a fantastic sight! You’d just have to make sure to stay well out of the way of flying debris. 🙂
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And, it would be bittersweet for the person who owned it. Thank you for reading.😃
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It’s certainly the sort of thing you won’t forget.
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Absolutely!
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Wonderful visual! I never would have likened the destruction of a storm with a strip tease. Excellent!
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Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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That I did!
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A great image of a silo stripping off, little by little. Such a tease! Nice litttle story, Jessie. 🙂
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Thank you, Millie. I appreciate the comment.
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Sounded like the silo was doing a strip tease. It made a frightening scene seem comical. Good job!
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Thank you. It took a while to come up with something and then I just started writing and it all came together.
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Like the analogy of the silo doing a strip tease in the storm. I’ve certainly seen trees gyrating in winds so I can well believe it. Great flash.
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Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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The imagery is great.. I guess that at it would be nice to watch from a distance
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Yes, I would prefer to keep safe distance from it. I would like to see it, not feel it.
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Vivid and scary! I like your original take. Well done.
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Thank you, I appreciate your reading it and commenting. I’m glad you like it.
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I like your idea of the silo doing a strip tease. I can picture the scene well.
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That is fascinating and a bit scary, a swaying, dancing silo that loses its clothes bit by bit. Great story.
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Dear Jessie,
Very interesting analogies and images. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, I appreciate the compliment.
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