This is in response to a weekly challenge hosted by Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The goal is to write a story between 100-150 (give or take 25 words) based on the provided photo.
This is a continued mini series:
Chapter 1 Permalink: https://luckyjc007.com/2015/03/17/pact/
Chapter 2 Permalink: https://luckyjc007.com/2015/03/27/kidnapped/
Chapter 3 Permalink: https://luckyjc007.com/2015/04/01/clown-house/
Chapter 4 Permalink: https://luckyjc007.com/2015/04/08/reliving/
Chapter 5 Permalink: https://luckyjc007.com/2015/04/14/reminder/
Thank you Vanessa Rodriquez for this weeks photo prompt.
“Message”
Damon and Garnet arrived at Millbra train station and as they stepped on the platform there was a small pigeon sitting in front of them.
To Damon and Garnet it was a message for them. They had arrived to the town where they should settle down. They traveled from town to town for ten years.
While having lunch in a small restaurant, they met a young woman named DeeGee. She told them her real name was Donna Georganna. Her parents liked calling her DeeGee because it reminded them of her twin brothers who were missing for sixteen years and it gave them comfort to call her DeeGee.
When they asked her what her last name was, she said Taylor. Damon and Garnet drew in a large breath of air, looked at each other with raised eyebrows and questionable eyes as they wondered if this young woman was possibly , just possibly, their sister!
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Copyright © 2015 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved
Nice finish.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Oh, is there a happy ending for D&G on the horizon? Or will it twist away in the next instalment? Nice work!
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Thank you for your comment. I’m considering several different things and hope the next prompt photo will tie in with it.
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A family reunion is underway, then? After sixteen years?
I really enjoyed your take on the prompt. 🙂
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Thank you, I was really excited to see the prompt this week..it fitted in with just what I needed.
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Great ending! I am sure that DeeGee is their sister. Yay! Excellent Jessie!
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Thank you Joy, I’m glad you like it. I’ve really had fun putting this together each week.
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You certainly have done well each week making them all attach together.
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Wow. Great way to tie it all together! 🙂
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Thank you so much. I was real happy to see that pigeon in the photo…it really started me in the right direction.
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After all Damon and Garnet have been through, I really hope DeeGee turns out to be their sister. Mind you, anything can happen in fiction, and that might just be too good to be true. Another great development, Jessie. 🙂
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Thank you Millie! I have thoughts of bringing things to a close, yet, enjoy the challenge each week to see how far I can carry it. I guess the photo and my thoughts will make the decision eventually.
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I hope she is! These boy’s need some happiness after the life they’ve led so far. Good continuation. 🙂
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Yes, they have been through a lot and have been denied part of their childhood. Thanks so much for commenting.
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lovely story Jessie 🙂
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Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Can’t wait to read what’s next. Nice ending 🙂
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