Mondays Finish The Story 04-06-2015
Thank you Barbara W. Beacham for this photo prompt.
“Mysterious”
Once upon a time in a land far, far away was a mysterious body of red water.
People traveled from miles away just to come soak in this beautiful red water. It was so invigorating and caused their body to become completely relaxed as tiny red bubbles swirled around them. All of their aches and pains disappeared in just one hour.
It was so popular they decided to give it a special name. Hence, it became known as The Red Water Natural Healing Spa. Accommodations were built so visitors were able to sleep and eat there when spending more than one day at the spa.
Copyright © 2015 Written by Jessie Cross ~ All rights reserved.
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Nicely done Jessie! I am so happy that you found the Mondays Finish the Story flash fiction challenge! I hope that you return for the next challenge! Be well… ^..^
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Thank you. I don’t often get a chance to write on Mondays since it is a traveling day, but will certainly do it every chance I get.
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I look forward to when you can return next! Be well…
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Somehow I felt so relaxed 😀
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I could do with spending a day or two there!
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Yes in deed! It would make life more relaxing. Thank you for commenting.
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I feel more relaxed just reading that after the past few day’s I’ve had! great story 🙂
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My pleasure! I hope your days get better. Hang in there!
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That sounds like heaven on earth.
Great story!
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Thank you for commenting. Yes, we could all use a bit of heaven on earth.😃
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An ideal place to ease the aching body, Jessie, and a good response to the prompt. I love the idea of the tiny red bubbles swirling around them. 🙂
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I’m so glad you enjoyed it. I was really pondering to come up with a “feel good” story with a photo that looked like blood!
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That sounds like a lovely place to visit. 🙂
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Yes, thank you. Everyone can use some relaxation in their life.
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Wow, that must be some miracle water. You made me want to go to that spa at once. Well done. 🙂
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